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Monday, January 25, 2010

WaLk tO rEmEmBeR!!!

I work part time as a desk staff at resident halls here on campus. Today early morning I had a shift from 8 to 12. Sitting on the couch with a desk in front, I was trying to study the concepts of "Shock waves" (Yeah I know tat sounds crazy!!). Anyways as I was trying to concentrate there was a beep from the elevator on my left which meant somebody was coming down. After a few minutes I heard a voice,
"535".
I looked up, a big guy around 6'4" and a girl around 5', were standing in front of the desk. They looked sleepy for obvious reasons. Must have had a loving night. The girl had unfairly sweet killer looks and the guy was undoubtedly lucky.
"Pardon", I said as I wanted to confirm the room number again.
"room 535", The girl said this time.
"sure", I replied back and pulled out their Id's from 535 pack in the box and returned them.
"Have a wonderful day", I wished them and they wished me back.
They went out from the automatic door. I could not help noticing as they were walking straight out. I was able to see them from far enough. The sky was little darker than usual. It had rained earlier. There was this cool morning breeze along with a bit of drizzle in the air. They were walking slowly, holding hands. The guy hugged the girl sideways. Just a few steps later the girl hugged him back. The girl kept her one hand in her pullover's pocket as it was cold but the guy was fine in his t-shirts. For some obvious unobvious reasons, guys never feel cold when they are with girls. The guy said something to the girl. I am not sure what that was but it had certainly made her smile as she gave that little shy look to him. Two steps later she looked up towards the guy who was already looking down. They came closer and the girl's lips touched the guy's for a second and they hugged a little tighter, feeling the rush of blood inside.
They kept walking.
The guy must have joked about something again as the girl had a boisterous laugh. She hit the guy on the shoulder and started palying around. She jumped over the guy's back and the guy held her legs and kept walking in a funny way. After few steps he pulled her down. They looked at each other, shared a nice warm hug, smiled and started walking in the opposite directions. It was one of the loveliest walks I had seen in a long time. It was certainly a walk to remember. They had lived one of the best moment of their lives in those few steps. Sitting little far away from them I was wondering If they were aware of it..............

26 comments:

shriti said...

As always a wonderful write up .. the way you describe even the minutest details is worth appreciating .. there seems to be no stone unturned in the effort of putting tht incidnt which would have lasted hardly for a few minutes, into a string of words .. ofcourse without letting the feelings escape out ... :)

A little advice from me .. STOP staring couples so intensely. You never know when you get behind the bars on charges of stalking !!! :P

Naveen said...

Thnx a Lot shriti!!
well they cant charge me for being a gud observer :-)

aayanman said...

The loveliest walks you have ever seen brought out the hidden voyeur in you ! ha ha had to say it [kidding] !

when you are in love...simple things become special..when you are out of love special things look ordinary...such is love or life...

@ngel ~ said...

Im totally agree with both Shriti and Gyanban... :)

Arpit said...

Boss...
You actually made there walk.. "A Walk To Remember" :)

Great Post.. Loved It..

Neha More said...

Well...i don hav nythng new 2 say...its awl said...the way u have potrayed ur obseravation and woven it beautifully in words has actually made the walk to be a remembered one!!!!

Naveen said...

@Gyanban---well yeah m a voyeur in tat way...:-) ..n u said it well...such is luv n life..

Naveen said...

@somyaa---Im happy tat u agree wth dem:-)

Naveen said...

@Arpit---Tats wat I said in the last line whether they were aware f it or not......
@Neha---some walks r js unforgettable..

Neha More said...

yeah!!!! sum walks r indeed unforegettable!!!!! esp. d unintended ones....

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

nice and sweet post Naveen... the strange part about moments like these are that only a guy observing it realizes how lovely they are and the people part of the moment don't... very well narrated... and yeah agree with Shriti, dont stare at chicks who have boy friends who are 6'4... u never know what that might lead to hehehe... u have a nice blog...

cheers!
Latest blog post: To the love that once was...

savvy said...

what can i say about this, dear.How u do this even u have a great and very sweet moments in very small things.but really this a funda of Life. U rocks!!!
bus at last kaash aap humare hote......;)

Chakoli said...

:))

Infact there are many moments... like this and be keep forgetting :D

ur posts reminds me of many of those moments... thanks :D

Naveen said...

Thanx Tavish fr ur visit...I appreciate ur comment :-)

Naveen said...

@Savy---dil titli haan???

@chakoli---I feel happy wen smone is reminded of those "moments" after readn ma blog :-) Thnx!!

savvy said...

What does u mean by dil titli?? Only one thing always remember am your biggest fan or isme meri koi galti nahi :( aap likhte hi itna achha ho kisi ko bhi aapse pyaar ho jaaega ;)

Naveen said...

titli as in butterfly :-)

@ngel ~ said...

Haan Naveen itna achha likhna band kar do warna kisi ko bhi aapse pyaar ho jayega :P
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Naveen said...

Thnx somyaa and savy!!

Darcy said...

What a wonderful story, it made me smile! Thanks for sharing (and noticing) the moment!

Naveen said...

@Darcy---I really feel gud tat it made u smile!!

Anonymous said...

some moments r special bt r realised later.. Thanx for makin me smile rememberin them.. Thanx for sharin ur observence.. Well written.. Tc..

Naveen said...

@anonymous---Thnx a lot!!

Anonymous said...

lovely post... :)

Pooja Prahalad. said...

LOVELY :)

Naveen said...

thnx Dodo n pooja...:-)